6.3 The Review-and-Revision Cycle (the Class Teacher's Feedback)

The first-draft's-submission (the teacher's-review (the errors'-list (the common-ones: the parties'- misdescription (the kitta's-wrong (the clause's-missing (the witness's-omission)))))); the revision's (the corrected-redraft (the "the-second-the-better" (the feedback's-absorption (the mistake's- never-repeat)))); the iteration's (the until-the-clean (the "the-perfection's-craft" (the practice's- own-world (the senior's-review-the-junior's-redraft))));